Editing

Thanks to the helpful advice of a blogger I have a renewed vigor for my writing. I am going to take a few days to edit the previous chapters and hopefully make them better. I’ll pass the edited work to some friends and update them on here when I get the feedback. Every critique I … More Editing

Chapter Nine

If you haven’t checked out the other chapters just go to my homepage and click “The Sheriff” under categories! Like always: feel free to drop some critiques! Any little thing helps my writing and is greatly appreciated. The next chapter will be very exciting so stay tuned! The SheriffChapter Nine:The Fair Grounds “This couldn’t be … More Chapter Nine

Blow It!

Originally posted on On The Pynk Couch:
If you’ve ever had one of these, you know the meaning of true fun.  You also know what to do in a crisis, ie. when the game starts “acting” up.  I don’t remember who told me, but I knew when Mario Bros. wasn’t working correctly to take the…